my loving nan

[linsloveschippys]

Hi all i would like to ask anyones opinion on this poem I have written for my nan, I have to read it in church on monday and I am a bit scared is it ok?


We sat and watched you for a while
With tearful eyes we tried to smile
Knowing that it would be our last
We’d think of memories from the past.
Although its time for you to go
There’s something that I want you to know
You’re now our angel up above
Sunshine skies filled with love
With manicured nails and painted toes
You’ll help us out with all our woes.
You fought long and hard with all your will
But now its time to be with Bill.
Now your at peace its good to say
We’ll live to fight another day
So now its time to say goodnight
Because we know the time is right.
In memory of a Mother, Sister, Nan and friend
Time will heal and hearts will mend.